“Never” by me

I wrote this to this very old poem from like Junior year of high school. I was going for a lot of things in this, it was actually inspired by a Paramore song back when I was imagining it as a song. It isn’t finished and it doesn’t have drums but I probably won’t do them for awhile. I also added a choir’s voices so i make cues for certain notes but I think I may keep them or most likely trade it in for organ when I do drums. As always opinions appreciated and welcome.